Talk:Stjepan Vukčić Kosača/GA3

GA Review
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Reviewer: Vacant0 (talk · contribs) 17:50, 2 January 2022 (UTC)

Hi! I saw this article on the GAN backlog. I will start the review a bit later. Cheers, --Vacant0 (talk) 17:50, 2 January 2022 (UTC)

General
's with an unbulleted list per MOS:NOBR.
 * Kosača CoA isn't needed in the infobox, it can be removed.
 * Link Novi with Herceg Novi in the infobox.
 * Replace the
 * Medieval should be uncapitalized in the lede.
 * Link Knyaz in the lede and "Early life and rise" section. The rest of the lede is alright.
 * The "Despotat of Serbia" in the second sentence in the "Struggle for family inheritance" section is a typo? Is it meant to be Despot of Serbia or the Despotate?
 * Link opportunistically.
 * "Of major Bosnian nobility, the first to act was Radislav Pavlović, while the Vojsalićs and Radivojevićs attacked in the Lower Neretva valley with success." → The first one to act from major Bosnian nobilities was Radislav Pavlović, while the Vojisalićs and Radivojevićs attacked in the Lower Neretva valley with success.
 * The "Incursion into Zeta" and "Citizenship of Dubrovnik" sections both have two sentences and are short, my recommendation would be to merge them.
 * Link papacy.
 * Merge "According to sources, approximately 2000 (some cite up to 12,000[9]) were converted to Catholicism, as reported by the apostolic legate, Nikola Modruški, who resided in Bosnia between 1461 and 1463" with "Manichean heretics were baptized forcefully".
 * Link Rome.
 * "Stjepan acted, and with the support of Venice, prepared to attack." → Stjepan acted, and with the support of Venice he was prepared to attack.
 * Make the "Land possession" section a sub-heading and move it near an appropriate section.
 * "Historiography, personality a legacy" can be shortened to just "Legacy".
 * There is an extra space in "In 1964, Ćirković published his historical biography, Herceg Stefan Vukčić-Kosača i njegovo doba, using his predecessors, and in particular the specific research of Ilarion Ruvarac, Jakov Lukarević, Lajos Thallóczy, Aleksa Ivić, Mihajlo Dinić, and Vladimir Ćorović." between doba and using.
 * Link Machiavelli.

Images

 * File:Stefan Vukcic and the war in Zeta 1441-es.svg is unsourced, initially uploaded by Bratislav in 2009, claiming as own work. Can you find a source for this map?
 * Have you found a source for this map? --Vacant0 (talk) 11:20, 8 January 2022 (UTC)
 * Hello, Vacant, what's up. Well, map like most illustration here is sourced in some text. Admittedly, I don't like it very much, because these kind of articles span entire lifelong eras, while these kind of maps, in a way, try to freeze up a series of events in time into one frame. However, all that being said, it is drawn very much correctly - in our case this map, for the period 1440-1445, can be refed in Sima ćirković's "Herceg-Stefan i njegovo doba", Glava III, and same author "Istorija srednjevekovne bosanske države", pages between 270-275. So, let's keep it for now.-- ౪ Santa ౪ 99°  12:16, 8 January 2022 (UTC)
 * Alright, thanks. I'm ready to promote the article to GA. Vacant0 (talk) 12:20, 8 January 2022 (UTC)
 * That would be great, Vacant. Thank you, I really appreciated your commitment and inputs, it was pleasant experience working with you on this. Until the next time, stay safe and take care.-- ౪ Santa ౪ 99°  12:37, 8 January 2022 (UTC)
 * No problem, take care. --Vacant0 (talk) 17:33, 8 January 2022 (UTC)