Talk:Stoned at the Nail Salon/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 21:19, 3 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments
 * Could link Universal Music New Zealand.
 * ✅ --LivelyRatification (talk) 07:30, 7 September 2021 (UTC)


 * "featuring backing vocals from four other musicians" you already said this.
 * ✅ Removed the unnecessary repetition. --LivelyRatification (talk) 07:30, 7 September 2021 (UTC)


 * "and "Solar Power", the" link.
 * ✅ --LivelyRatification (talk) 07:30, 7 September 2021 (UTC)


 * Lead should probably cover how well it did and how critics received it.
 * ❌ Added information on critical reception to lede, but not really sure what to add re: the song's performance. Chart-wise, there wasn't anything that remarkable aside from "it charted", except for maybe its no 22 placement in NZ. --LivelyRatification (talk) 07:30, 7 September 2021 (UTC)


 * "second single[2] from" odd place for a ref.
 * ✅ Moved [2] ref to end of sentence. --LivelyRatification (talk) 07:30, 7 September 2021 (UTC)


 * " D major" link.
 * ✅ --LivelyRatification (talk) 07:30, 7 September 2021 (UTC)


 * "beats per minute" link.
 * ✅ --LivelyRatification (talk) 07:30, 7 September 2021 (UTC)


 * Rolling Stone doesn't need to be piped.
 * ✅ --LivelyRatification (talk) 07:30, 7 September 2021 (UTC)


 * "previous single, "Solar Power".[4] Also" overlinked now.
 * ✅ Removed link to Solar Power. --LivelyRatification (talk) 07:30, 7 September 2021 (UTC)


 * "Thumbs" and Clairo's" overlinked.
 * ✅ Removed link to Clairo. --LivelyRatification (talk) 07:30, 7 September 2021 (UTC)


 * "drew comparison by ... who noted the difference" this feels like it's saying sort of the same thing.
 * ✅ Changed to read ""Stoned at the Nail Salon" drew comparison by critics to Lorde's (pictured) earlier work." --LivelyRatification (talk) 07:30, 7 September 2021 (UTC)


 * "of The Guardian wrote" overlinked.
 * ✅ --LivelyRatification (talk) 07:30, 7 September 2021 (UTC)


 * "for The Telegraph, Neil" The Daily Telegraph?
 * ✅ --LivelyRatification (talk) 07:30, 7 September 2021 (UTC)


 * "on the Billboard Hot" overlinked.
 * ✅ --LivelyRatification (talk) 07:30, 7 September 2021 (UTC)


 * "appeared at #85" avoid using hash for number.
 * ✅ --LivelyRatification (talk) 07:30, 7 September 2021 (UTC)


 * "Shaffer of Rolling Stone, "sings " overlinked.
 * ✅ --LivelyRatification (talk) 07:30, 7 September 2021 (UTC)


 * "guitar".[36] Billboard writer" overlinked.
 * ✅ --LivelyRatification (talk) 07:30, 7 September 2021 (UTC)


 * Ref 38 has a spaced hyphen, should be en-dash.
 * ✅ --LivelyRatification (talk) 07:30, 7 September 2021 (UTC)

That's all I have for now. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 10:43, 4 September 2021 (UTC)
 * Sorry for not getting to this until now, for some reason this wasn't on my watchlist and I missed it. Anyway, I've made most of the changes here, just have some quibbles about one of them. --LivelyRatification (talk) 07:30, 7 September 2021 (UTC)