Talk:Stony Island (Michigan)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 18:35, 5 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments That's it. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 20:49, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
 * Not sure why so many cites in the lead, see MOS:LEADCITE, as everything in the lead is normally mentioned in the article, reference it there instead.
 * ✅ I've written an actual lead.
 * Put (USGS) after the expanded version.
 * ✅ Done.
 * "in Wayne County.[5]" overlinked.
 * ✅ Done.
 * "″W[1], and" ref after comma.
 * ✅ Done.
 * Lead could use one or two more sentences, perhaps about its history.
 * ✅ Done.
 * I would have the History section ahead of the Ecology section.
 * ✅ Done.
 * "chinkapin oak, hackberry and cottonwood" links?
 * I had those linked, but they got tagged with a dn because they weren't links to specific species. The source itself doesn't give this information (all it says is "There are approximately 20.2 ha (50 acres) of upland area which includes a mix of vegetation; massive chinkapin oak, hackberry and cottonwood are among the old growth"). Since I didn't want to do OR, I just removed the links.
 * "over 23 species" more than.
 * ✅ Done.
 * "ed lake sturgeon,[6]:4​lake whitefish,[6]:4​rainbow smelt,[6]:8​northern pike,[6]:10​muskellunge,[6]:10​carp,[6]:13​minnow,[6]:17​channel catfish,[6]:19​bullhead[disambiguation needed],[6]:19​white bass,[6]:22​smallmouth bass,[6]:22​yellow perch,[6]:25​walleye,[6]:31​and " spaces after each reference, and one of those is already tagged as [disambiguation needed].
 * ✅ Done.
 * " by Potawatomi, who" context, who were they?
 * ✅ Done.
 * "connecting it to Grosse Ile[2] as" overlinked.
 * ✅ Done.
 * "activity died down" dredging activity?
 * ✅ Done.
 * "1977[10] until the company ceased operations in 1987.[12]" put that [10] at the end, nasty placement now.
 * ✅ Done.
 * Date formats in the references should be consistent.
 * ✅ Done.
 * Ref 1 needs more information, publisher/website and publication/access date etc.
 * I assume you're talking about the GNIS ref; I don't think I can do this, since the reference is provided through a template (Gnis). I can try to look at the documentation, but it doesn't seem like it will work.
 * I think that covers everything. Thanks for picking up these articles so quickly! jp×g 22:44, 5 September 2021 (UTC)