Talk:Strabops/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Dunkleosteus77 (talk · contribs) 18:16, 19 January 2019 (UTC)

Dunkleosteus77

 * "with a lateral margin rounded anteriorly," did you just say the head is round?  User:Dunkleosteus77 &#124;push to talk 18:16, 19 January 2019 (UTC)
 * Yes, changed to "rounded outline". Super   Ψ   Dro  19:02, 19 January 2019 (UTC)


 * Does eurypterid start with an e sound or a y sound?  User:Dunkleosteus77 &#124;push to talk 18:16, 19 January 2019 (UTC)
 * I am not the most suitable for pronunciations but I would say "y". I think I know what you mean and I have to say that I did not know this gramatical rule.


 * What was the similarly-named Aglaspida subclass?  User:Dunkleosteus77 &#124;push to talk 18:16, 19 January 2019 (UTC)
 * A clade that encompassed all the definitely aglaspidid genera, strabopids and other uncertain genera. Should I explain the included clades in the article?
 * No what was the name of the subclass?  User:Dunkleosteus77 &#124;push to talk 20:12, 19 January 2019 (UTC)
 * Aglaspida, it is similarly named to Aglaspidida.
 * Oh I see, I just misread it  User:Dunkleosteus77 &#124;push to talk 00:27, 21 January 2019 (UTC)


 * You should probably say the Xiphosura are horseshoe crabs  User:Dunkleosteus77 &#124;push to talk 18:16, 19 January 2019 (UTC)
 * Done.


 * Why are some of the taxa in the cladogram bolded?  User:Dunkleosteus77 &#124;push to talk 18:16, 19 January 2019 (UTC)
 * They represent the major chelicerate groups. Now this is stated in the article.
 * You should probably put that in the caption of the cladogram ("Bolded taxa are...")  User:Dunkleosteus77 &#124;push to talk 20:12, 19 January 2019 (UTC)
 * You mean this?
 * Sorry, I was looking below the cladogram  User:Dunkleosteus77 &#124;push to talk 00:27, 21 January 2019 (UTC)


 * In the taxobox you specify only the type species T. thacheri implying there are more, but since there's only one species, you want to use . But that's a really minor thing, so I'll go ahead and pass  User:Dunkleosteus77 &#124;push to talk 00:27, 21 January 2019 (UTC)
 * Done.


 * And tiny grammar thing, in the future, "further" is a synonym of "also," and "farther" is a measure of distance (for example, "...And further, I think you can throw the ball farther")  User:Dunkleosteus77 &#124;push to talk 00:27, 21 January 2019 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review! I'll take that into consideration. Super   Ψ   Dro  23:47, 21 January 2019 (UTC)