Talk:Strange star

no source and really bad grammar
"While this is of course still theoretical; there is good evidence the researchers from this paper provide that point to the collapse.."

What paper? Is the two on a separate line? Why are the sources not placed where it belongs, and how did something with such bad grammar survive a day on Wikipedia. Someone needs to make this not read like gobbledegook.

Jackhammer111 (talk) 19:52, 26 June 2018 (UTC)