Talk:Stranger in a Strange Land (Lost)/GA1

GA Review
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I'll be doing the GA review for this article. Here are some suggestions for improvement. A copyedit is also needed, but I'll do that when everything else is taken care of. The article will be on hold for seven days. Nikki 311  13:32, 10 August 2008 (UTC)
 * Characters and actors should be linked the first time they appear, so they need to be linked in the lead, if that is their first mention.
 * Mention something about the reception in the lead.
 * Also, I'd mention something about the episode being created around Fox's tattoos.
 * Others is linked twice in the plot.
 * Greatest Hits (Lost), which is a FA, mentions what day it is on the island.
 * How many viewers saw the episode? How does it compare to the previous Lost episode, and how does it compare to other shows that ran at the same time?
 * Image:Strangerstrangelandlost-011.jpg needs a fair use rationale.
 * I struck out all the fixed things, hope you don't mind. I will try to fix the rest of it soon.  Corn.u.co.pia /  Disc.us.sion  09:13, 11 August 2008 (UTC)
 * I have fixed most of the raised points. I added some info on Fox's tattoos, is it enough? As for the date on the island, I cannot find it on the net. Even though "Greatest Hits" has it, not all other Lost episodes do.  Corn.u.co.pia /  Disc.us.sion  12:05, 14 August 2008 (UTC)
 * Great work. I think it is good enough without the date on the island to pass. I'm going to pass the article. Question, though: is the first paragraph in italics because it is a flashback, or is that a typo? Nikki  311  16:23, 14 August 2008 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the pass. I did not write the plot section, but I'm pretty sure its because it is a flashback. I am actually going to remove the italics, because other Lost episodes are not like that.  Corn.u.co.pia /  Disc.us.sion  06:12, 15 August 2008 (UTC)