Talk:Stratified reproduction

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 20 September 2018 and 21 December 2018. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Harisfkhaliq. Peer reviewers: Lhoy18, Mausman22.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 03:52, 18 January 2022 (UTC)

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Hello everyone! In one of my college classes, we were asked to edit a Wikipedia page that related to our class. I chose this page, stratified reproduction, for several reasons. The main reason was that I noticed the page only had the fundamental definition of stratified reproduction. There was hardly any elaboration on the many aspects of stratified reproduction. I am adding one section, infertility, because I feel that this is a major global issue and a large aspect of this topic. Meh student (talk) 13:05, 1 August 2018 (UTC)User:Meh student

Hello! I'm in a class in which I need to edit a Wikipedia page as well. This article meets the required topics because reproductive technologies often are utilized differently for women of color creating the system of stratified reproduction. However, this article only discusses how stratified reproduction affects Latina women and while though that is very important, this article does not address bigger institutional issues that go alongside stratified reproduction. This article could be expanded upon to include a larger scope on the topics addressed related to the system of stratified reproduction such as the environmental discrimination, forced sterilization, and the prison system. There could also be a section on the how increasing reproductive technologies play a roll in furthering the system of stratified reproduction. — Preceding unsigned comment added by BaileyArthur475 (talk • contribs) 02:58, 22 October 2018 (UTC)

Marlon's Peer Review
Overall, I believe that your article reflects the amount of research you have done. I am very interested and inspired by the structure you have created believe that is effective to your article. Personally, I'm a visual person so I would like to some visuals as I read to assist me in making sense of information. I do recommend adding some images just to lighten the reading a bit. Other than that, I believe it is a strong article.

Mgonz140 (talk) 05:10, 9 November 2018 (UTC)Marlon