Talk:Street, Somerset/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Casliber (talk · contribs) 03:34, 2 September 2010 (UTC)

Okay, I'll jot queries here (I had to review this as I stayed in the YHA here in 1991 :)): Casliber (talk · contribs) 03:34, 2 September 2010 (UTC)


 * I'd change "The name Street comes from a 12th century causeway..." to "Its name comes from a 12th century causeway..." and append it onto the first few sentences, which look odd just sitting there in an ugly miniparagraph
 * Done


 * Why is Lantokay bolded and Lega not? Also the bit abour Roman occupation sits odly tacked onto the end of that sentence.
 * Lantokay is a redirect to this article. Lega goes to a dab page where I have added an entry as an earlier name for Street.


 * In fact, that's where I'd break for a new para, taking the Roman bit and making a para on history.
 * Done


 * " ...suggests a lan "- can we link somewhere?
 * Hhmm - can't find anything suitable - it means field in Romanian but I haven't got anything else apart from the cited ref which says it comes from Welsh.
 * now linked & expansion/explanation included.&mdash; Rod talk 11:36, 2 September 2010 (UTC)


 * blue lias is capitalised in one bit and not the other
 * Done


 * The churchyard of the Parish Church has yielded a pre-Roman gold coin... - preRoman? wow! Any further info on this? I think it sounds pretty significant...
 * Gathercole says "one iron age coin has been found, though the precise significance of this is unclear." but it is known the Dobunni made coins in the area so I have added that.


 * The Governance section has stubby paras - some reworking would be good. Extra info could be famous parliamentarians, whether both/either bodies are left- or right-wing leaning, controversies/disputes etc.
 * I've combined paras but can't find anything "famous" at present
 * Added councillors & MP (almost all Liberal Democrat).&mdash; Rod talk 17:36, 2 September 2010 (UTC)


 * very first beacon school in Somerset - a what? Link or explain...also this section could be combined into one para really.
 * wikilinked


 * The only cinema in Street was closed down and converted into a nightclub in the 1990s. - umm, Strode Theatre sounds like a cinema to me..?
 * Only "single use" cinema added


 * Religious sites section is stubby. I realise alot went into the history section instead. Anything else to add would be good, even just a couple of lines...
 * Nothing else at present.
 * I've expanded this a bit.&mdash; Rod talk 12:00, 2 September 2010 (UTC)

Summary - as always, looking pretty good. Just some minor buffing and she'll be right mate :) Casliber (talk · contribs) 04:14, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
 * Than ks for the comments & edits. I hope some of your queries are dealt with?&mdash; Rod talk 07:33, 2 September 2010 (UTC)

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 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
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 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
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