Talk:Stresemann's bushcrow/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Cwmhiraeth (talk · contribs) 12:05, 23 February 2012 (UTC)

I will be starting this review in the next few days and would welcome input from others. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 12:05, 23 February 2012 (UTC)

Comments
On the whole the article is well written with correct punctuation and grammar. The lead section is less satisfactory and there are several places in it where I feel there is a word such as an "and" or an "a" missing. On the whole, the lead is a fair summary of the contents of the article but it could also mention the bird's conservation status.

In the "Reproduction" section, could you add a wikilink or explain "Allofeeding and allopreening". Also in that section, the dimensions of the nest seem strange. How can it be globular, 30cm long and 60cm in diameter? The sentence which starts "The nest is made out of thorny twigs, which the interior chamber ..." needs attention. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 14:39, 28 February 2012 (UTC)