Talk:Students for Life of America

Wiki Education assignment: Writing 101-The Archive
— Assignment last updated by Docscharn (talk) 21:57, 5 April 2023 (UTC)

Hawkins
I’ve infiltrated DOC Robert Hawkins study group. Please advise- think I’m loosing my mind. Kristi, did you ever feel that way? 2600:1702:5280:DC10:A802:8199:49D2:1CCB (talk) 08:35, 26 May 2023 (UTC)

Expanding the article
Hello fellow contributors, I've introduced a new section in the article titled "Views and Philosophy." This section aims to offer readers a more nuanced understanding of SFLA's perspectives by including their self-stated views. I am in the process of writing about their positions on specific issues based on their own statements. This addition, I believe, will contribute to a more comprehensive and first-person understanding of the organization's philosophy.

Additionally, I recently made edits to the introduction section, specifically addressing the mention of legal issues faced by SFLA. In the original sentence, it could be interpreted as if the organization has a supernatural ability to navigate legal issues frequently. To ensure a more accurate and neutral representation, I modified the sentence to read "SFLA has been involved in some legal litigations." This phrasing avoids the implication of routine involvement in legal matters. Additionally, I would like to open a discussion on whether the introduction needs to include details about legal issues at all, as there is already an extensive section covering a specific legal matter. I believe this adjustment enhances the overall neutrality and clarity of the article. I welcome your thoughts and feedback on this matter. — Preceding unsigned comment added by TragicPower (talk • contribs) 03:33, 2 February 2024 (UTC)