Talk:Stunt Junkies

Not being an experienced editor at all I wasn't sure how to present this, but is it just me or does this passage:

"TMBA, Inc. is the New York City animation studio that created the 3D animations of the "physics behind the stunts". These edgy "graffiti" style graphics added lots of visual excitement and helped to quickly, clearly explain the science behind each stunt. These stylized motion graphics were layered on top of detailed 3D re-creations of each stunt. This allowed producers manipulate man & machine and highlight the riskiest aspects of each stunt adding great dramatic tension."

simply sound like an advert for the TMBA company? can we make this a little more objective sounding at least?

update: o.k. i did. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Deepstructure (talk • contribs) 23:09, 24 August 2010 (UTC)


 * Concur, it is written in an 'advert-speak' style with wp:peacock terms. The editor who added it appears to be closely connected to the TMBA company. 220  of  Borg 18:02, 3 February 2014 (UTC)