Talk:Suave (song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 08:24, 4 January 2023 (UTC)

I will review this per your request, Erick! --K. Peake 08:24, 4 January 2023 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Shouldn't Larrabee be written as Larrabee Sound in the infobox?
 * "The song was met with positive reactions" → "The song received positive reactions"
 * Move the award-winning sentence to being the one after the above, also place the music video one after the commercial sentence
 * "by Kiko Guerrero, filmed in" → "by Kiko Guerrero and filmed in" since the last and is the only one to not use "was"
 * "Commercially, the track reached" → "Commercially, the song reached"
 * "Rivera's cover was nominated in" → "The cover was nominated in"

Background and composition

 * "A 27-second sample of Miguel's "Suave"," → "A 27-second sample of "Suave"," on the audio sample text, also change the title to "Suave"
 * First para looks good!
 * Wikilink as cover versions instead
 * Shouldn't you identify the album by name in the second para?
 * The dance genre is not sourced
 * "and its lyrics narrates about a" → "and its lyrics narrate about a"

Promotion and reception

 * Wouldn't it be more suitable to write that the live version was featured on Miguel's live albums then write the titles?
 * "listed as the best three songs" → "listed it as the best three songs"
 * Wikilink VH1
 * Why is the Notitas Musicales position not mentioned here?
 * Remove pipe on covered

Track listing

 * Good

Personnel

 * Pipe percussion to Percussion instrument
 * Pipe background vocals to Backing vocalist
 * Pipe mixing assistant to Audio mixing (recorded music)

Weekly charts

 * Retitle to Charts

Jerry Rivera version

 * Infobox looks good!
 * The 1995 recording year is not sourced
 * Wikilink funk
 * "became his first number one song" → "became Rivera's first number one song"

Charts

 * Good

Final comments and verdict

 * until all of the issues are fixed; here is your true New Year's gift! --K. Peake 09:47, 4 January 2023 (UTC)
 * Thank you for the review!, can you handle it for me? My only days off work are Sunday and Mondays. Erick (talk) 19:26, 4 January 2023 (UTC)
 * @Kyle Peake Alright, I think I got all of them. As usual, let me know if I missed any of them. The only one that confused me was ""by Kiko Guerrero, filmed in" → "by Kiko Guerrero and filmed in" since the last and is the only one to not use "was"". Erick (talk) 15:12, 8 January 2023 (UTC)
 * This point meant that it is the last part of the sentence and does not use was, also you missed changing the audio sample text. --K. Peake 21:40, 9 January 2023 (UTC)
 * ✅ now, I had to re-edit the music video sentence since I meant the part after the comma could be changed because it did not use was. --K. Peake 09:20, 10 January 2023 (UTC)