Talk:Subglottic stenosis/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Tom (LT) (talk · contribs) 08:22, 6 August 2021 (UTC)

Hi, I'll take up this review. I'll first read over the article a few times and then post my review in a day or two. Tom (LT) (talk) 08:22, 6 August 2021 (UTC)

Review
Overall it's clear that some effort has been put into this article. However it doesn't meet the good article criteria. As a reader I found that this article's language had a lot of jargon in it and was difficult to understand. There were a lot of lists interspersed with some facts but it was difficult to take away major elements. I don't think enough information was included in many sections, including the two sections that are just one sentence, to meet good article status. To improve this article I think further time could be taken synthesising the information, providing context, and fleshing out empty sections. I got the feeling this lack nuance and given the wide variety of potential causes I am sure that there would be different approaches depending on what the cause was and that this and other factors (such as a person's age) would highly influence prognosis.

I hope that helps and although I acknowledge the effort that was put into the article, it's not ready for GA status right now. Yours, Tom (LT) (talk) 04:21, 7 August 2021 (UTC)