Talk:Sud-Ouest Espadon/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Zawed (talk · contribs) 08:57, 18 February 2021 (UTC)

I will review, comments to follow in due course. Zawed (talk) 08:57, 18 February 2021 (UTC)

Lead
 * link mixed-power?
 * Spelled it out instead.

Background
 * link Lucien Servanty
 * ...and submitted the SO.6020 when the French Air Force issued not crazy about the phrasing here. Suggest something like "and submitted a design proposal, designated SO.6020, in response to the French Air Force issuing..."
 * Rephrased.
 * The aircraft had have a speed "had have"? Maybe " had to have.
 * with planes to order "plans"?
 * aircraft satisfied the requirements. suggest "aircraft satisfied its requirements.
 * The aircraft was a metal-skinned mid-wing suggest "As built, the aircraft was a metal-skinned mid-wing..."
 * was the Heinkel ejection seat part of the original specification?
 * Yes.

Development
 * possibly due to the need to revise the air intakes shouldn't intakes be singular? Or should the first mention of intakes be plural?
 * Good catch.
 * Is there a link for SO.6025?
 * No.
 * I'm confused by the references to the SO.6021 in this section. On the one hand, it is a fighter prototype and on the other it is the proposed production version.
 * I think that I've clarified it now

Specifications
 * Is it necessary to recite the book titles here, can't [16], [17] just go against the "General characteristics" heading?
 * The aircraft specs template won't allow that
 * OK, I didn't realise that was a template. Zawed (talk) 03:19, 27 February 2021 (UTC)

Other stuff That's it for me. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 09:34, 18 February 2021 (UTC)
 * One dupelink - cockpit
 * Image tags look OK
 * Hey, just checking you've seen this. Zawed (talk) 09:06, 25 February 2021 (UTC)
 * Looks good to me, passing as GA as I believe it meets the criteria. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 03:19, 27 February 2021 (UTC)
 * See if my changes are satisfactory. Thanks for being patient with me.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 21:24, 25 February 2021 (UTC)