Talk:Sudarshan (magazine)

Copy edit request
Hello Gog. After a long time. I just completed this draft about a magazine founded by Manilal Dwivedi. Could you please help me with paraphrasing.? Thanks. --Gazal world (talk) 18:49, 9 January 2020 (UTC)
 * Done. Nice work. Obviously, revert anything you don't like. It could do with a slightly longer lead IMO, but I leave that to you. Gog the Mild (talk) 21:19, 9 January 2020 (UTC)
 * Thank you very much. --Gazal world (talk) 21:28, 9 January 2020 (UTC)