Talk:Sue Williams (artist)

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 15 January 2019 and 30 April 2019. Further details are available on the course page. Peer reviewers: GerardoGordillo, Byrneed.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 03:54, 18 January 2022 (UTC)

Byrne Peer Review
The lead of this article could go much more in depth. The single sentence is short and does not give much information besides the fact that this person is a visual artist. The article itself is very neutral. The structure itself is clear but rather small. Broaden the "early life and education section". You could consider modifying the "work" section to "career" and then you can add more detail or information to this section as well. Overall it is balanced well. Also, some of the links to not directly go to the external source. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Byrneed (talk • contribs) 00:54, 9 April 2019 (UTC)