Talk:Suffer in Peace/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 21:53, 6 April 2020 (UTC)

Infobox

 * The producers should be mentioned with a source
 * No source for the label or release date
 * Say that is a coutnry album in the body of the article
 * No source to state when it was recorded
 * When did GANs require a reference to be put in the infobox? DepressedPer (talk) 22:57, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Since you don't add it in the body of the article. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 23:00, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
 * As everything was move to the body of the article, doesn't need sources here. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 14:58, 8 April 2020 (UTC)

Lead

 * at numbers 2 and 4 → at numbers two and four
 * charts respectively → charts, respectively.
 * and spawned three singles: → It spawned three singles,
 * State a little regardging the performance of the singles
 * Do the same regarding the music and lyric content
 * You can mention the producers of the album
 * Other promoton of the album? NBC and nother concert
 * This needs to go more in depth
 * How's it looking? DepressedPer (talk) 23:20, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Great. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 14:31, 8 April 2020 (UTC)

Background and development

 * Redneck Crazy → release date of the album in between brackets
 * title track and "Whiskey in My Water" → title track, released on... and "Whiskey in My Water" (DATE)
 * "A Guy Walks Into a Bar" → same as previous
 * Is this right? DepressedPer (talk) 23:20, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
 * I should have been more specific, the year is just fine. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 14:29, 8 April 2020 (UTC)

Music and lyrics

 * swampy banjo groove → swampy groove (as the source states)
 * bar joke → old joke
 * writers' round → people are not familiar with this concept
 * Jason Aldean → wikilink
 * while reminding himself of his religious upbringing → not on given source
 * "Better in Boots" is a bro-country song → same as previous
 * wanting to get a chance with an uptown girl → "getting the girl at the end of the day" (quite diferent)
 * wanted it to have class and not be overly patriotic. → wanted it to show "gratitude and respect and to honor the troops"
 * How's the change-up from the "writers' round" wording? DepressedPer (talk) 23:20, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
 * You need to explain the concept, the rest is fine. What do they do at those gaterings? MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 14:17, 8 April 2020 (UTC)
 * How is it? DepressedPer (talk) 14:45, 8 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Outstanding. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 15:00, 8 April 2020 (UTC)

Singles and promotion

 * to build up hype for the album → byas and doesn't come with the source
 * certified Gold → remove wikilik + gold not on capital letter
 * A music video directed by Jeff Venable was created for the singl → Its music video was directed by Jeff Venable
 * numbers 47 and 52 on both the Billboard Hot Country Songs and Country Airplay charts respectively → numbers 47 and 52 on both the Billboard Hot Country Songs and Country Airplay charts, respectively
 * A music video directed by Eric Welch was made for the single and premiered on June 15, 2015 → The single's music video was directed by Eric Welch and premiered on June 15, 2015
 * instead push → change
 * he will headline → he would headline
 * All these charts need to be wikilinked only once
 * ✅ DepressedPer (talk) 23:20, 7 April 2020 (UTC)

Critical reception

 * Suffer in Peace received mixed reviews from music critics divided over the production and lyrical content. → Suffer in Peace received mixed reviews from music critics. (The other sentence can and shoud be used in the lead)
 * Jamie Parmenter of Renowned for Sound praised → Jamie Parmenter of Renowned for Sound commended
 * pacing a bit slow → doesn't sound good
 * despite praising → however, he lauded
 * mixed reviews from music critics → The more mixed is Spin, where are the mixed reviews and the negative ones? There are a lot more reviews online. One Country.
 * Added another Billboard article in there as well. DepressedPer (talk) 23:20, 7 April 2020 (UTC)

Track listing

 * Missing total length
 * ✅ DepressedPer (talk) 23:20, 7 April 2020 (UTC)

Personnel

 * Use so there is the right space between credits and personnel.
 * AllMusic is not a good source for album credits, unless it is a really old album. Use another one
 * ✅ DepressedPer (talk) 23:20, 7 April 2020 (UTC)

Chart performance

 * Move it to the critical reception and rename the section as "Reception"
 * Billboard 200 → wikilink
 * 4 → four (numbers between 1 and 10 have to be spelled out)
 * 2 → same as preivous
 * selling 36,300 copies for the week, 41,629 units in total album activity (including streaming and TEA)→ selling 36,300 copies in tradional album sales and 41,629 units, including streaming and track equivalent album sales
 * Move the above sources to the end of the sentence
 * On the Billboard 200, it dropped to number 26 the week after and went to number 46 the week of May 30.[36][37] On the week of June 6, it fell to number 71,[38] another spot to 72 the next week,[39] and left the top 100 by dropping down to number 121 for the week of June 20 → I get the point; just say "It left the top 100 on the week of June 2, 2015 (?), spending (insert number of weeks) on the chart."
 * ,before leaving the next week. → remove (don't need to make the same point twice)
 * ✅ DepressedPer (talk) 23:20, 7 April 2020 (UTC)

Album

 * Fine

Singles

 * Remove → Songs have their own articles you mention peak positions
 * ✅ DepressedPer (talk) 23:20, 7 April 2020 (UTC)

Promotional singles

 * Same as previous, add the promo single release on the article
 * I couldn't find the exact release date of the title track. DepressedPer (talk) 22:57, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Can you find a realiable source saying it was a promo single? MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 02:39, 8 April 2020 (UTC)
 * The only reliable source of a promo single I can find is for "Poor Boy"/"Damn Good Friends" on Ebay UK. No source for the title track. DepressedPer (talk) 14:05, 8 April 2020 (UTC)

Don't add it then. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 14:07, 8 April 2020 (UTC)

Overall

 * Do a release history secton in the end of the article. I made some minor changes, for example, including the producers on the backgroud section see if you are fie with them. I did everything section by section so it would be easier to spot.MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 14:32, 8 April 2020 (UTC)
 * I've added the release history section. DepressedPer (talk) 14:45, 8 April 2020 (UTC)