Talk:Suillellus luridus/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Khazar2 (talk · contribs) 06:10, 7 April 2013 (UTC)

I'll be glad to take this review. Initial comments to follow in the next 1-3 days. Thanks in advance for your work on this one! -- Khazar2 (talk) 06:10, 7 April 2013 (UTC)

Checklist
This looks really excellent on first pass. I see no issues and am proceeding to the checklist.

That's a big pass! But please note that I made some minor copyedits as I went. Please double-check that I haven't accidentally introduced any error, and feel free to revert anything you disagree with.


 * All copyedits look good - I can see the idea behind the splitting of the sentence with the second clause commencing, "Some guidebooks...." - I might go with a semicolon there....Casliber (talk · contribs) 07:00, 7 April 2013 (UTC)
 * Go for it. =) -- Khazar2 (talk) 07:03, 7 April 2013 (UTC)