Talk:Suit Warehouse/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Ed! (talk · contribs) 20:59, 26 February 2013 (UTC)


 * Add another line or two to the lead noting what exactly in the episode reviewers liked and disliked.
 * "Plot" section: "Darryl Philbin (Craig Robinson) is off to Philadelphia to interview at Jim Halpert's (John Krasinski) new company," -- the company is named in this episode, so you should include that.
 * " (since office manager Andy is still not back from his sailboat excursion)." -- I don't think parenthesis are needed here. Also, Andy should be linked here instead of below, since it's the first mention of him.
 * " (for the job Andy currently holds)" -- You might want to note the episode where this happened, since it was significant to the character's development.
 * " and then is chatted up by an employee that says" -- I think you mean who says
 * " Meanwhile, Darryl initially fumbles his interview due to nerves and him feeling inadequate, but everyone else helps calm him down" -- This is a little wordy, I think you can trim it down.
 * " After absolutely nailing the interview, " I think this sounds a little unencyclopedic. Could you rephrase?
 * "Just as everything is about to turn really ugly, " I don't know what this means. Maybe it should just be taken out or rephrased?
 * Production section should note the guest actors, which should also be cited.
 * I fixed one duplicate link. Disambiguation links all look good. External links all look good.
 * I don't see any problems with article stability or neutrality.


 * Placing the article on hold pending a few improvements. I made a few copy-edits so see if they check out. — Ed! (talk) 21:36, 26 February 2013 (UTC)

Everything looks good. Passing the GA now. — Ed! (talk) 15:09, 6 March 2013 (UTC)