Talk:Sukhoi Su-33/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Wizardman  Operation Big Bear 15:12, 27 July 2011 (UTC)

I'll review this article shortly. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 15:12, 27 July 2011 (UTC)

I read through this last night and didn't see any issues, but I was half asleep so I'll read through it again later today to see what I can find. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 18:11, 29 July 2011 (UTC)

Here are the issues I found:
 * "In the event, insufficient funding was secured" I'd either rephrase to 'in any event', or ideally just drop that starter entirely.
 * Link Crimea.
 * "A takeoff ramp was installed the complex" on/in the complex
 * "However, when the aircraft was front of it for longer than the maximum 6 seconds" six can be written out here.
 * "manoeuvrability" maybe it's spelled differently in British English but I'm still sure there's a typo there.
 * That's the English spelling.
 * The operators section feels like it can be merged with the operational history section, since the former doesn't say much the other doesn't.
 * I agree. But the "Operational history" section talks about conflicts and deployments, while "Operators" summarises which regiment or squadron the aircraft serves with. Merged

I'll put the article on hold for a week and will pass it when the issues are fixed. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 03:45, 30 July 2011 (UTC)


 * I'm done with your requests. Anymore problems? BTW, I've reviewed Aruba at the 2008 Summer Olympics.  Sp33dyphil  "Ad astra" 04:22, 30 July 2011 (UTC)
 * I went and fixed the issues over there. I don't see anymore problems so I'll pass this as a GA. Wizardman  Operation Big Bear 16:49, 30 July 2011 (UTC)