Talk:Summer Wars/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: DragonZero  ( Talk  ·  Contribs ) 09:44, 10 May 2011 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality:
 * B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources:
 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Pass or Fail:


 * Comments by DragonZero  ( Talk  ·  Contribs )
 * Reference 1: Publisher Amazon, Work Boxofficemojo. Mistake
 * Fixed mistake. Darth Sjones23 (talk - contributions) 20:35, 10 May 2011 (UTC)


 * Reference 3: Dead
 * Replaced with the PDF link. Darth Sjones23 (talk - contributions) 20:35, 10 May 2011 (UTC)


 * Hosoda explained how his perceptions of family were changed by marrying after completing The Girl Who Leapt Through Time, clarify?
 * Clarified sentence. Darth Sjones23 (talk - contributions) 20:35, 10 May 2011 (UTC)


 * Does the similarity between digimon and this movie need to be noted in the development section?
 * Moved similarity down to reception section. Darth Sjones23 (talk - contributions) 20:35, 10 May 2011 (UTC)


 * Reference 10 did not state the large cast was the direct cause of longer-than-average production time.
 * Corrected sentence. Darth Sjones23 (talk - contributions) 20:35, 10 May 2011 (UTC)


 * Has the soundtrack received an official English translation? If not, the romaji should come before translations. Use Nihongo3 template.
 * Changed. Darth Sjones23 (talk - contributions) 20:35, 10 May 2011 (UTC)


 * Source for Kadokawa Shoten heavily promoting the film?
 * Removed. Darth Sjones23 (talk - contributions) 20:35, 10 May 2011 (UTC)


 * Could the single sentence about the Korean newspaper be merged into a bigger paragraph?
 * The sentence has been merged. Darth Sjones23 (talk - contributions) 20:35, 10 May 2011 (UTC)

It looks good in general. I could not review the sources that were non-english but presume they were reliable. On hold until the 15th for improvements. DragonZero ( Talk  ·  Contribs ) 09:44, 10 May 2011 (UTC)
 * I don't see any problems with passing this article. If I have misjudged, someone can send it to GAR. DragonZero  ( Talk  ·  Contribs ) 23:36, 10 May 2011 (UTC)