Talk:Summer of 4 Ft. 2/GA1

GA Review
The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.''

Sorry, because there is a big backlog at WP:GAN, but I jumped in to nab this one early as it's one of my favourite episodes! Comments follow: Well done. I'll put the article on hold so you have a week to make changes. Good luck! — 97198 (talk) 12:54, 17 December 2008 (UTC)
 * Repeated use of "kid/s" isn't really formal - I'd go with "child/ren", but it's not too big a deal
 * Lisa buys a new suit of clothes she believes - "clothes that she believes"
 * plots a revenge against Lisa - don't need "a"
 * there are "so much stuff" about summer vacations they felt - "there is/was" (but not plural); "vacations that they felt"
 * really likes the episode - not very formal, considering it's not a direct quotation
 * The animators researched many Cape Cod photographs - "researching photographs" doesn't make too much sense...
 * Josh Weinstein's parent's house in New Hampshire, which the writers had paid visit to many times - "parents' "; "to which the writers had paid visit many times"
 * Maybe mention something in the lead about the inspiration for the beach house, since that makes up the bulk of the production section (also don't need " the American actress")
 * Under cultural references, perhaps explain that Blossom is a character from the similarly-titled TV series
 * he buys a bunch of embarrassing stuff - "bunch", "stuff" are not encyclopedic at all
 * Lead spells out "twenty-fifth" but reception uses "42nd" - consistency
 * The website concluded its review - the website wasn't actually giving the review, it was a person... "She concluded her review" would do better.
 * Thanks for reviewing. I think I have addressed all of your concerns. :) The Le ft  orium  14:59, 17 December 2008 (UTC)
 * Looks good :) I left-aligned the Christina Ricci image to avoid the white gap created because of the text being held down under the infobox. Nice work; I'll pass the article. — 97198 (talk) 06:38, 18 December 2008 (UTC)
 * Awesome, thanks! -- The Le ft orium  14:17, 18 December 2008 (UTC)