Talk:Suncheon Bay National Garden

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Good start! This needs more work but I think this is pretty close to being able to move over!


 * More references, especially English language ones, might be useful for this article.
 * You have a couple long quotes here. I would keep the references but paraphrase the content in a neutral tone. This is more normal for encyclopedia articles.

I think once you've done this, you should go ahead and make your article live! — m a k o ๛  23:14, 23 October 2015 (UTC)

Your article looks great! I just want to add one more section which is Flower Zone to give more information about Suncheon Bay National Garden. Seobinyoon (talk) 05:40, 29 October 2015 (UTC)

Hi! Thanks for your suggestion. I am trying to find more sources other than official website! I'll make sure to add more information once I find it :) Eunicejl319 (talk) 05:12, 8 November 2015 (UTC)

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@Eunicejl319 Your article was interesting! Maybe, you should rephrase some sentences, make them short and simple? Otherwise, I think its a good article :) Xchen0417 (talk) 09:58, 31 October 2015 (UTC)

Hello! Could you please specify which sentences should I rephrase it? Thank you for your suggestion :) Eunicejl319 (talk) 05:14, 8 November 2015 (UTC)

Hm.. maybe these sentences? "There are about 860,000 trees and 650,000 autumn flowers such as roses, sunflowers, and cosmos flowers are planted in the garden." and "According to the data collected from Suncheon on October 13, the total visitors of the garden is now at the 400 million mark". Its not a big deal so if you don't want to, you don't need to. :)

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Overall, your article is interesting and informative. I think it would be better if you upload photo for people who doesn't know how it looks like. Minjiwoo (talk) 21:58, 31 October 2015 (UTC)

Hi! I just uploaded some photos that I took this summer. I hope people find it useful :)Eunicejl319 (talk) 05:18, 8 November 2015 (UTC)

Hello I really enjoyed your article I thought it did a great job at using a neutral voice and fits well for a wikipedia article. Not that the length necessarily matters, I also thought you did a good job on making an enlightening article that was straight to the point. Bigbuck stag (talk) 04:52, 8 November 2015 (UTC)

Hello! I am still looking for references to make my article more informative. I am glad that you enjoyed reading my article!Eunicejl319 (talk) 05:18, 8 November 2015 (UTC)