Talk:Sunday Morning (No Doubt song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 04:05, 9 June 2016 (UTC)

Hi there! I'm Cartoon network freak and here's my review to your GAN:


 * Lead
 * recorded by the American -> recorded by American


 * available as -> available as a


 * cassette single, and -> cassette single and
 * It's a serial comma–commonly used in American English


 * 1997 by -> 1997 through


 * the breakup -> their breakup


 * The song was written -> you've already used "song"


 * with one calling -> with one of them calling


 * peaking in the -> peaking within the


 * certified gold -> certified Gold
 * Gold does not need to be capitalized


 * Background and recording
 * Young, and musician -> Young and musician
 * Serial comma


 * Who is Angle
 * Gary Angle proceeds the sentence


 * officials, and had -> officials and had
 * Serial comma


 * band, and -> band and
 * Serial comma


 * when he did -> when he did so


 * more and more songs -> several songs


 * then his girlfriend -> his then-girlfriend


 * Composition
 * Flawless


 * Critical reception
 * Bleach from his -> Bleach, writing for
 * blog also enjoyed -> blog, also enjoyed
 * single... From -> single. [...] From


 * Commercial performance
 * successful, charting -> successful, with it charting
 * US -> United States
 * Try to not use "song" every time
 * certified gold -> certified Gold
 * Like I said, this would be incorrect


 * at positions -> at number
 * well, peaking -> well, with it peaking
 * the UK -> the United Kingdom
 * and number -> and at number


 * Music video
 * The song's music video -> An accompanying music video for the song
 * Remove "sometime"
 * band, after -> band, following
 * video opens -> video commences
 * ex-lover (Terry Hall) walks -> ex-lover, Terry Hall, walks
 * Terry Halls plays the lover, he isn't the actual lover though. Carbrera (talk) 16:40, 10 June 2016 (UTC)


 * with the ex-lover -> with Hall
 * Same as above. Carbrera (talk) 16:40, 10 June 2016 (UTC)


 * Credits and personnel
 * Credits and personnel adapted from the Tragic Kingdom liner notes. -> Credits adapted from the liner notes of Tragic Kingdom
 * cover art -> photography


 * Release history
 * Unlink formats and label


 * Outcome: On hold for 7 days. Best of luck, Cartoon network freak (talk) 04:48, 10 June 2016 (UTC)
 * I have changed the article accordingly; thanks a ton! Carbrera (talk) 16:40, 10 June 2016 (UTC)
 * Passing article. Congratulations! Cartoon network freak (talk) 17:33, 10 June 2016 (UTC)