Talk:Sunshine Days/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 03:20, 22 July 2012 (UTC)

General

 * No dab links. Great work!
 * No dead links. Great work!
 * Images have good rationales

Infobox

 * No issues

Lede

 * Unlink American per WP:OVERLINK
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)  16:30, 22 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Unlink television series per WP:OVERLINK
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)  16:30, 22 July 2012 (UTC)
 * "The episode first aired in the United States on May 12, 2002 on the Fox network" → "It originally aired on the Fox network on May 12, 2002"
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)  16:30, 22 July 2012 (UTC)
 * "unconnected to the series' wider mythology" should be "a stand-alone plot which is unconnected to the overarching fictional history of The X-Files"
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)  16:30, 22 July 2012 (UTC)
 * To many "The episode", consider re-writing.
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)  16:31, 22 July 2012 (UTC)
 * "The episode earned a Nielsen household rating of 6.2 and was viewed by 6.5 million households and 10.4 million viewers in its initial broadcast" → "The episode earned a Nielsen household rating of 6.2, was viewed by 6.5 million households, and 10.4 million viewers in its initial broadcast"
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)  16:30, 22 July 2012 (UTC)
 * finale should be final
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)  16:30, 22 July 2012 (UTC)

Plot

 * Link California
 * I linked Van Nuys, CA instead.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)  16:30, 22 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Add actor for Blake and Mike
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)  16:30, 22 July 2012 (UTC)
 * "was where the popular television series The Brady Bunch was filmed" → "where the comedy series The Brady Bunch was filmed. This is partly per WP:NPOV
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)  16:30, 22 July 2012 (UTC)
 * "Later that night" add comma
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)  16:30, 22 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Actor for Martin
 * It's already there.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)  16:30, 22 July 2012 (UTC)
 * discovers should be discover
 * Add actor for Fogelman
 * Fogleman is the same person as Martin.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)  16:15, 22 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Add actor for Oliver Martin
 * It's already there.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)  16:15, 22 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Add actor for various others
 * Where are the other ones your are talking about? I didn't mention them in the prose and citing the whole Brady Family would be ridiculous.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)  16:30, 22 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Link Washington, DC
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)  16:30, 22 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Should be "Washington, D.C." not "Washington, DC"
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)  16:30, 22 July 2012 (UTC)

Production

 * finale should be final
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)  16:30, 22 July 2012 (UTC)
 * "The Brady Bunch house set featured in the episode was built "from scratch". Huh?
 * Rephrased.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)  16:30, 22 July 2012 (UTC)

Broadcast and reception

 * Link Nielsen household rating to Nielsen ratings
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)  16:30, 22 July 2012 (UTC)
 * "Fox Broadcasting Company promoted the episode with the promise that it was the "most bizarre" episode of The X-Files to ever been shown". Firstly, Fox Broadcasting Company should be Fox. Secondly, Fox should not be linked as it is already linked above
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)  16:30, 22 July 2012 (UTC)