Talk:Sunshine of Your Love/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: FunkMonk (talk · contribs) 19:53, 20 February 2015 (UTC)


 * Will take this one! FunkMonk (talk) 19:53, 20 February 2015 (UTC)
 * Thanks FunkMonk. Why is Jimi Hendrix posthumous discography ignored?
 * Quick fixes! Well, personally I've never visited the Featured Lists page before, but I'll give it a look. FunkMonk (talk) 18:23, 21 February 2015 (UTC)


 * "or riff developed by Bruce" and "Brown had a difficult time writing lyrics", Dowed etc. Introduce all persons and their role at first mention in the article, not just the intro. The lead is just a summary of the article, the article itself should be able to stand alone.
 * OK, done. —Ojorojo (talk) 18:14, 21 February 2015 (UTC)


 * "gave the song their wholehearted approval" The song? Earlier you mention several demos of several songs.
 * Added "SOYL"; the ref specifically names it. —Ojorojo (talk) 18:14, 21 February 2015 (UTC)


 * "and harmonic motions like like A–C–G" One like too many? Also, same quote could have links to Led Zeppelin and Whole Lotta Love?
 * Fixed. I see another editor linked "WLL". I've been told quotes should not contain links. —Ojorojo (talk) 18:14, 21 February 2015 (UTC)


 * "Hendrix often performed faster instrumental versions of the song, which he often dedicated to Cream." One often too much maybe?
 * Fixed. —Ojorojo (talk) 18:14, 21 February 2015 (UTC)


 * I'd expect the sample to include the main riff (most well known part of the song), but it cuts just after and before?
 * My setup doesn't allow me to play these. If it doesn't have the riff, then it shouldn't be here. —Ojorojo (talk) 18:14, 21 February 2015 (UTC)
 * I could maybe make a new version, can you give me some timing for what part you'd want to include? FunkMonk (talk) 18:24, 21 February 2015 (UTC)
 * I like the segment beginning at 2:02, you can hear the riff and the woman tone. However, some may want to hear vocals, so the very beginning may be a good choice. —Ojorojo (talk) 19:53, 21 February 2015 (UTC)
 * I've now added the first 20 seconds (with initial silence removed), for the sake of the ordinary reader, but we can also add the other part instead. FunkMonk (talk) 20:32, 21 February 2015 (UTC)
 * That works for me. —Ojorojo (talk) 21:16, 21 February 2015 (UTC)
 * Alright then, I'll pass this, just remember to readd the sample, or it will probably get deleted... FunkMonk (talk) 21:20, 21 February 2015 (UTC)