Talk:Super Rich Kids/GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer: Khazar2 (talk · contribs) 18:15, 29 October 2013 (UTC)

I'll be glad to take this one; comments to follow in the next 1-3 days. Thanks in advance for your work on it! -- Khazar2 (talk) 18:15, 29 October 2013 (UTC)

This looks reasonably good on first pass; there were some copyediting problems, but none that couldn't be immediately cleaned up. Two action points below, and if you disagree with any of my changes so far, feel free to revert. Thanks again for your work here....


 * As (arguably) a statistic, the song length should have an inline citation in the infobox
 * ✅ 和DITOR  E tails 19:15, 29 October 2013 (UTC)
 * "Singer Michael Bublé sang the song in an interview with VH1, when he was asked "What kind of stuff would we hear your sing?". " -- this seems incredibly trivial--he only sings one line from the song as a joke, and it doesn't appear mentioned in any secondary sources about the song. (Also, watching the video, the quotation seems wrong). I'd suggest cutting this. -- Khazar2 (talk) 18:36, 29 October 2013 (UTC)
 * Removed 和DITOR  E tails 19:15, 29 October 2013 (UTC)
 * According to an interview in GQ, the song's inspiration is the movie Traffic--seems important to include, as it's the only hint I could find of the song's inspriation. -- Khazar2 (talk) 18:44, 29 October 2013 (UTC)
 * I'll add it, but before I can do that is there another reliable link displaying this interview, cause Rapgenius is usually not a reliable source. 和DITOR  E tails 19:15, 29 October 2013 (UTC)
 * Good catch, thanks. More direct link here. -- Khazar2 (talk) 19:17, 29 October 2013 (UTC)