Talk:Supercut (song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 09:00, 2 January 2018 (UTC)

Lead

 * co-wrote the song → co-wrote the track (for alternation)
 * It was inspired by the heartbreak she felt → replace "she" with "Lorde" to make it clear who you mean here
 * after the breakdown of relationship → after breaking up
 * Link "Music critics" to Music journalism
 * and many compared → while many compared
 * those of Swedish singer, Robyn → no comma
 * an interpolation of another Lorde song, "Green Light" → an interpolation of her 2017 single "Green Light"
 * and it was one of six songs she performed as part → and it was one of six songs used as part of (for alternation of wording)

Infobox

 * Flawless ;)

Recording and composition

 * The track's lyrics are about remembering → The track's lyrics revolve with remembering
 * Lorde said "Supercut" is a "sister song" → Lorde said "Supercut" was a "sister song"
 * She wanted to feel as if one is → do you mean that she wanted the song to feel like that?
 * she played it as she left The Spotted Pig → she played it as she left gastro pub The Spotted Pig

Critical reception

 * Link "music critics" to Music journalism
 * Link "Royals" to its article
 * because the album is sequenced → as the album was sequenced
 * Link "the term" to supercut
 * a colleague of Tiffany's from Vox → the colleague thing is superfluous; just say "writing for Vox"
 * Zoladz called it a "great pop song → Zoladz further called it a "great pop song (for flow)

Live performances, covers and use in media

 * Rename this section into "Live performace and other usage"
 * on the night of the singer's album release → on the night of the singer's Melodrama release (for clarification)
 * which is composed of five tracks → change "tracks" to "songs" to avoid repeating yourself
 * Image: of "Supercut" on Triple J → of "Supercut" on radio station Triple J

Credits and personnel

 * Flawless ;)

Copy-violation

 * 25.9% is acceptable!

Outcome

 * This was a very interesting reading! I put the article for 7 days! Best; Cartoon network freak (talk) 10:40, 2 January 2018 (UTC)
 * All done! Thank you, once again! De88 (talk) 04:26, 3 January 2018 (UTC)
 * Gladly passing! Cartoon network freak (talk) 09:19, 3 January 2018 (UTC)