Talk:Superfest International Disability Film Festival

Few minor suggestions
I had a few thoughts that might be useful if someone wants to do a little copyediting:
 * "During the film festival, they provide interpreters and narrators to allow for the attendees to appreciate the films." – This isn't going to be clear to people who have always appreciated films without benefiting from either interpreters (i.e., sign language interpreters for Deaf people) or narrators.
 * "the real pieces of disability" – this is perhaps an unclear phrase.
 * "The 2016 festival was celebrated as their thirtieth film festival" – I think that editors usually write that as "30th", and "celebrated" might not be the most WP:TONE-sensitive word that could be used there.
 * "In 2013, Superfest presented a special event to feature films where disability is mocked." – Since there's a lot more going on, it might be good to expand this sentence to include insensitivity.

WhatamIdoing (talk) 23:40, 3 February 2017 (UTC)
 * Thanks, ! I incorporated your feedback. Jackiekoerner (talk) 16:43, 7 February 2017 (UTC)