Talk:Supermarine Channel/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 11:58, 13 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 11:59, 17 September 2021 (UTC)
 * Could make redirects at Supermarine Channel Type and Supermarine Channel II.
 * "Armstrong Siddeley Puma. Designed" should that be "Armstrong Siddeley Puma engine. Designed"?
 * " the Solent" it appears (and who knew?) that "the" is part of the formal title of the river.
 * "Norway's first airline" name? link?
 * And in other news, the formal name of "the River Orinoco" is just "the Orinoco".
 * "Supermarine Commercial Amphibian" is mentioned in the infobox as a variant, but not the Channel Type or the Channel II. And the Supermarine Commercial Amphibian isn't mentioned in the article.
 * "construction.The" space.
 * "although the number of passengers was limited to three" could just say "although limited to three"?
 * "Beardmore engine" you called it by its full name in the lead and not here. Probably better the other way round.
 * "10 Channels, five" 10/5 or ten/five.
 * "4-seater" four-seater.
 * You mention "Channel I aircraft" was Supermarine Channel I also another variant/title?
 * "acquired one aircraft." is that also referenced by [8]?
 * "Supermarine Aircraft since 1914 [8]" no space before ref.
 * Bullet before external link.
 * Thanks, I believe the above points are now addressed. The infobox has been amended as only variants with their own article are listed. Amitchell125 (talk) 21:06, 17 September 2021 (UTC)