Talk:Supermarine Seal II/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 18:25, 16 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments
 * Could consider creating Seal II to redirect here as that seems to be the common name after the initial statement that it was a Supermarine aircraft.
 * Help! Seal II already redirects to another article, and I've no idea how to proceed, apart from adding a hatnote to the other article (which I've done). Amitchell125 (talk) 06:11, 18 September 2021 (UTC)
 * I think that's sufficient for now. There could be a requested move discussion over which of the two relatively obscure targets is the most common, but it's probably a lot more effort than it's worth. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 06:54, 18 September 2021 (UTC)


 * Is there a link for piston engine we could use?
 * I've used Aero engine, as the above link goes to a very general article. Amitchell125 (talk) 06:18, 18 September 2021 (UTC)


 * "by the Royal Air Force (RAF). " overlinked and put the (RAF) after the first instance.
 * "In 1921 a Seal II was sold to the Imperial Japanese" sold the Japanese before the RAF took delivery of it? Crikey.
 * Hopefully now all sorted. I got confused here, mainly as nearly all the sources inerchange Seal II with Seagull (the name was changed, but only in July 1921). Amitchell125 (talk) 18:02, 18 September 2021 (UTC)


 * Having said that, it says number  built 1, so how did that  work?
 * "produced by Supermarine's " overlinked.
 * Link "fleet spotter" in background section,  just as you have in the lead.
 * Oh you have, but not first time.
 * "this happened to because" not quite right?
 * "company's Commercial Amphibian entered" overlinked.
 * " R.J. Mitchell, later to become " already linked and previously (twice) referred to as  Reginald rather than R.J.  (and our article is at R. J. Mitchell).
 * Everything you linked in the lead, link first time in the main body, e.g. biplane.
 * "Supermarine Channel II" put the II inside the piped link.
 * "to [13] Kasuimiguara, " odd place to drop  that ref in!
 * "an RAF Display" what is this and why is it capital D?
 * Sentence amended, the Display (called this from 1925) was an annual event. AM

That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 14:47, 17 September 2021 (UTC)
 * All above comments now addressed. Amitchell125 (talk) 18:02, 18 September 2021 (UTC)