Talk:Superstar (Madonna song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Azealia911 (talk · contribs) 01:37, 9 September 2015 (UTC)

Hello, I'm  Azealia 911  talk  and I'll be reviewing this article to see if it meets the good article criteria. A full reivew will be provided within 48 hours  Azealia 911   talk  01:37, 9 September 2015 (UTC)

Review:
 * I'm happy to inform you that on the large part, this article pretty much already meets the GA criteria, there are just a few tweaks I'd like you to implement. Once they've been addressed, I'll pass the article.

General

 * There should be no space in S. Paulo, all uses should read S.Paulo.

Infobox and lead

 * The cover image needs an alt.
 * Either add a caption to the cover image or remove
 * graffity → graffiti
 * A music video was shot → A music video for the track was shot
 * however it was controversial since Madonna wanted to dress as a "Terror Bride", which is a combination of an Iraqi bridal veil and a US soldier's uniform. Due to this reason she opted not to wear the dress or to finalize the video. → however, it was controversial since Madonna wanted to dress as a "Terror Bride", a combination of an Iraqi bridal veil and a US soldier's uniform. Subsequently, the video was never released.

Background and composition

 * The Abbey Road Studios picture needs an alt.
 * Editing for the track was done → Editing for the track was completed
 * there's a repeated use of "by by"
 * "When it hits the bridge dubstep influences are also evident" is this a quote from someone? It sounds very journalistic-ly written, consider something like "During the songs bridge, dubstep influences can also be heard"

Artwork and release

 * "a contest sponsored by Keep Walking Brazil project" is used twice in the same sentence, make the latter "after being among ten finalists in the contest"

Critical reception

 * Try switching up the flow in this section, every sentence starts with "*article writer* from *publication*"
 * from Daily Mirror → from the Daily Mirror

Track listing

 * Remove the quote marks in "Keep Walking Brazil"

Credits and personnel

 * Please move the line about the liner notes to the top of the section

Charts

 * I feel like the line about the downloads would fare better as a sentence before the chart box.
 * Make the columns unsortable