Talk:Superstore season 6/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 09:38, 17 May 2021 (UTC)

Comments
 * "Promotional poster with the season premiere's original airdate." fragment, no full stop.
 * ✅ Removed. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 16:23, 18 May 2021 (UTC)


 * Ben Feldman doesn't need disambiguation.
 * ✅ Removed. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 16:23, 18 May 2021 (UTC)


 * "fictional big-box store in" seems strange to call it a "big-box store" when it's called "Superstore" so it's a superstore, right?!
 * Pretty sure they mean the same thing. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 16:24, 18 May 2021 (UTC)


 * Nichole Sakura doesn't need to be piped to a redirect back to Nichole Sakura...
 * ✅ Removed. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 16:25, 18 May 2021 (UTC)


 * "Due to its impact on television in the United States, it was decided that Superstore would create episodes about the pandemic itself as a test for Universal Television." I don't follow this at all.
 * ✅ Reworded. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 16:29, 18 May 2021 (UTC)


 * "Victor Nelli, Jr." no comma.
 * That's how they was credited. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 16:33, 18 May 2021 (UTC)


 * "missing ring" engagement?
 * ✅ 16:34, 18 May 2021 (UTC)


 * "Jerusha he'd avoid" avoid contractions.
 * ✅ Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 16:36, 18 May 2021 (UTC)


 * "does some good things around alternative energy" rephrase using encyclopedic language.
 * ✅ Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 16:36, 18 May 2021 (UTC)


 * In fact, a lot of the synopses need to be copyedited for tone. I know it's a sitcom but these synopses need to be factual and properly written/toned.
 * ✅ Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 16:36, 18 May 2021 (UTC)


 * "while they're" contraction again.
 * ✅ Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 16:41, 18 May 2021 (UTC)


 * Link showrunner.
 * ✅ Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 16:41, 18 May 2021 (UTC)


 * "for Universal Television to test" what do they have to do with it?
 * ✅ Added mention that they produced the show. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:42, 19 May 2021 (UTC)


 * "by Thanksgiving, the" not the same date across the world, be specific.
 * ✅ Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:33, 19 May 2021 (UTC)


 * "table read" link.
 * ✅ Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 16:41, 18 May 2021 (UTC)


 * "her [...] and " do you need those brackets?
 * ✅ Yes since it's not the whole quote. 16:43, 18 May 2021 (UTC)


 * "original October 22" original scheduled.
 * ✅ Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:34, 19 May 2021 (UTC)


 * ""episodes began airing on Thursdays" episodes aired on Thursdays
 * ✅ Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:34, 19 May 2021 (UTC)


 * "beginning with its sixth" -> "from the sixth"
 * ✅ Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:34, 19 May 2021 (UTC)


 * "approval rating of 92% based" but just over 50% from viewers... worth noting.
 * ✅ Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:38, 19 May 2021 (UTC)


 * Avoid SHOUTING IN CAPS in the ref titles.
 * ✅ Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:40, 19 May 2021 (UTC)


 * Ref 22, replace spaced hyphen with en-dash.
 * ✅ Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:35, 19 May 2021 (UTC)

On hold for now. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 16:19, 18 May 2021 (UTC)
 * I think I have finished addressing all of your suggestions. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 01:11, 20 May 2021 (UTC)
 * Ok, it's fine, promoting. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 07:45, 23 May 2021 (UTC)