Talk:Survival horror/GA1

GA Review
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 * Thanks a lot for the helpful review:
 * 1A: I tweaked the prose to reduce the redundancy. However, I also added some prose to deal with 3B
 * 2B: I fixed a lot of the sources. Let me know if I missed anything.
 * 3B: I added substantial information about more action-oriented titles, including Left 4 Dead.
 * 6A: I fixed the FUC for all the images.
 * 6B: However, I have not dealt with the Alone in the Dark image yet, because I can't upload images. I'm waiting for a little bit of help. In the meantime, let me know if the prose is still okay.
 * So, in summary, everything should be fine, except 1A which is questionable, and 6B which I hope to deal with over the next day or two. Randomran (talk) 18:59, 23 April 2009 (UTC)
 * That's good, I've just performed a really minor copyedit for some last niggles. The prose as far as I'm concerned now is fine. I've also replaced the recently added Left 4 Dead image with a fresh one - in contrast to the Alone in the Dark image, that one's probably got a bit too much going on in it. Its not really a good image for representing the game as a whole. I'll deal with the image for Alone in the Dark if your having trouble. -- Sabre (talk) 19:44, 23 April 2009 (UTC)
 * I appreciate the give and take. If you could replace the AITD image, you'd be helping me out big time. Let me know if there's any other prose or formatting that needs cleaning up. Randomran (talk) 19:49, 23 April 2009 (UTC)
 * Ok, the new image is in place. I believe we have reached the stage of a pass. Congratulations! -- Sabre (talk) 19:56, 23 April 2009 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the useful feedback, and for getting a little hands-on with the article. Next step, FA! Randomran (talk) 19:58, 23 April 2009 (UTC)