Talk:Survivor Series (2005)

Lead

 * 1) The reference tells you the theme song, but not the tagline. A reference needs to be found of the tagline.
 * One doesn't need to be found as it is on the poster to the left. – L A  X  19:57, 17 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) The tagline and theme song can be separated into two sentences.
 * – L A  X  20:11, 17 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) Wiki-link "main event"
 * – L A  X  20:11, 17 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) Explain or wiki-link "Survivor Series match"
 * – L A  X  20:11, 17 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) change "Team Raw" and "Team Smackdown" to superstars from the Raw brand against superstars from the Smackdown brand.
 * I mentioned the Teams' members names. – L A  X  20:11, 17 April 2008 (UTC)

Background

 * 1) have been competitive before, needs to be sourced, explained, or removed.
 * Sourced. – L A  X  20:39, 17 April 2008 (UTC)
 * Now reworded. – L A  X  19:07, 18 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) Wiki-lined "elimination match"
 * – L A  X  18:58, 18 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) The second sentence as a whole needs a reference
 * Not every sentence needs a ref. – L A  X  18:58, 18 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) Put reference number 7 after the third sentence as well, since it works there.
 * Again, not every sentence needs a ref. – L A  X  18:58, 18 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) Source needed for The teams feuded on both shows, and Batista, the captain of the SmackDown! team, suffered an injury after being beat down several times
 * – L A  X  19:05, 18 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) Can "died" be changed to "passed away", it sounds better.
 * 2) Saying Bischoff despised Cena is more like a personal opinion.
 * – L A  X  18:58, 18 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) Did Bischoff choose Angle to just take the title from Cena, or to face him in a match for the title, hoping Angle would win?
 * – L A  X  18:58, 18 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) On the November 7 edition of Raw, Angle refused to compete due to the "you suck" chants from the audience. needs a ref.
 * – L A  X  18:58, 18 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) Angle finally agreed to compete when Bischoff censored the crowd, and let him have a special guest referee, whom Angle chose to be Daivari. needs a ref as well.
 * Once again, not every sentence needs a ref. – L A  X  18:58, 18 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) Ref needed for Triple H returning after three months.
 * – L A  X  19:05, 18 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) The two had been aligned since 2002, and were partners in a tag team match on the show. needs a ref.
 * And finally, not every sentence needs a ref. – L A  X  18:58, 18 April 2008 (UTC)

Event

 * 1) Some of the matches should be shortened, as they give a little bit too much of play-by-play.
 * – L A  X  00:55, 21 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) Can you find a wiki-line for "Best of 7-series" match.
 * – L A  X  01:00, 21 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) Stratus hit a diving bulldog to win, and retain the title. retain ---> retained.
 * – L A  X  21:19, 20 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) Wiki-link "screwdriver"
 * – L A  X  21:19, 20 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) Triple H to win the match finally won needs to be re-worded.
 * – L A  X  21:19, 20 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) Before starting the section about Edge and Lita in the ring, write "After that match,"
 * – L A  X  21:19, 20 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) his lack of a world championship I'm not sure, but shouldn't the w and c be capitalized in "world championship"
 * I'm not too sure about that. – L A  X  21:19, 20 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) and Angle leaved the ring needs to be re-worded.
 * – L A  X  21:19, 20 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) All five commentators provided commentary for, and argued during the match. for and argued?
 * – L A  X  00:56, 21 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) Msterio is obviously misspelled.
 * – L A  X  21:19, 20 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) Kane knocked down all of Team SmackDown!, and Batista knocked down Team RAW at the same time?
 * Removed. – L A  X  00:55, 21 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) Wiki-link "Spinebuster"
 * – L A  X  21:19, 20 April 2008 (UTC)

Aftermath

 * 1) After losing to the SmackDown! brand, Eric Bischoff was fired by Mr. McMahon on the December 5 edition of Raw. - needs a ref.
 * Z enlax T C S 18:54, 18 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) The feud between the brands ended, and McMahon took the spot as the temporary general manager of RAW. - also needs a ref
 * Z enlax T C S 18:56, 18 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) There should be a paragraph about the aftermath of the Angle/Cena feud and the Triple H/Ric Flair feud.

Results

 * 1) The match note about the Undertaker needs to be indented.
 * No, because it is a notable point in the event, similar to the dance segment at WrestleMania 23, which isn't indented. – L A  X  01:35, 18 April 2008 (UTC)

Other On-Screen Talent Table

 * 1) If the person does not have an article, the link should be removed. A GA should not have red links.
 * – L A  X  01:32, 18 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) It should start at the top of the event section.
 * – L A  X  01:32, 18 April 2008 (UTC)

Notify me when these are answered. iMat thew   20  08  19:55, 17 April 2008 (UTC)

GA review
Okay, I decided to take a look at this article (even though the last time I reviewed a PW one I was attacked on the project talk page), it's looking pretty good, but there is some stuff that needs addressing. That's about all. -- Scorpion0422 22:35, 19 May 2008 (UTC)
 * There appears to be something wrong with refs 8 and 11. There is random bolding in them, and apostrophes in various places where they probably shouldn't be.
 * That has to do with Template:Cite DVD-notes. I looked at the template itself and tried to fix it, but I could not find anything. – L A  X  22:44, 19 May 2008 (UTC)
 * "The tagline was "The Beginning of the End."" <- Needs a source.
 * No, because it is on the poster to right. – L A  X  22:44, 19 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Should it be mentioned somewhere that Long/Bischoff was named WON's worst match of the year?
 * I don't know, but I'll look into it. – L A  X  22:52, 19 May 2008 (UTC)
 * I could not find a source to back up that claim. I don't believe that is needed, but it wouldn't hurt for it to be added. – L A  X  23:25, 19 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Television shows should be italicized per the MOS. There are several uses of Smackdown! and Raw which are not.
 * All unitalicized mentions I found were referring to the brand and not the show. – L A  X  22:52, 19 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Considering the Benoit/Booker match is the first match of a series, the eventual result should be mentioned in the aftermath.
 * The ending came sometime in January. Should we really note that in this article? I think it should definitely be mentioned in the Armageddon (2005) article, though. – L A  X  22:44, 19 May 2008 (UTC)
 * We're supposed to assume that the reader is not entirely familiar with the topic, so someone note that it is the first match in a series and wonder how it ended. At the very least something along the lines of "the feud between Benoit and Booker continued into 2006, with Booker eventually regaining the title." -- Scorpion0422 22:47, 19 May 2008 (UTC)
 * ✅ – L A  X  23:17, 19 May 2008 (UTC)
 * "Triple H attacked Flair's head, after he used a screwdriver to Flair's head" two uses of the phrase "Flair's head" in one sentence, that should be fixed.
 * – L A  X  23:01, 19 May 2008 (UTC)
 * The paragraph about the Survivor Series match in the event section uses a lot of the same words over and over again.
 * Okay, I'm satisfied. Good work. -- Scorpion0422 23:38, 19 May 2008 (UTC)