Talk:Susan Hirsch

Reliable sources
The links to PoLAR aren't showing the information cited in this topic. The reader of the topic will not spend the time looking around the given website to find the cited information; a specific link is needed TEDickey (talk) 16:10, 12 January 2012 (UTC)

Removed the links to PoLAR, APLA, and the Library of Congress talk and edited content. But Library of Congress talk link might be useful to readers. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Thepeanut2 (talk • contribs) 16:57, 12 January 2012 (UTC)

Advert and jargon
The topic needs cleanup, since it introduces a lot of terminology without (a) providing third-party sources and (b) explaining the terms. For instance "legal anthropologist", "study of legal language", given title at GMU (which may be a paraphrase or exact title, but is unsourced). The topic's webpage doesn't count for any of that. Concentrating on finding WP:RS, in particular independent third-party sources commenting on, and explaining the various aspects of the topic is a good way to proceed TEDickey (talk) 17:05, 12 January 2012 (UTC)