Talk:Susquehanna and New York Railroad

Review and comments
I'm responding to the request for review of this article at WikiProject Pennsylvania. Ultimately, I've decided to rate the article as C-class. While the article is reasonably comprehensive and contains extensive inline citations, it still has some flaws. I can spot a number of typos, but most seriously, it's written in a very discontinuous, fact-by-fact style which lacks synthesis and summarization. There are also a number of things I remember from Kaseman's coverage that are not written up here, such as the proposed extension towards Binghamton and control of the railroad by Central Penna. Lumber. These issues should be addressed before further review or ranking of the article. Choess (talk) 08:17, 5 December 2009 (UTC)

Thanks for the feedback. Your thoughts are helpful. I also tried to contact Kaseman's son to get permission to use some of the photos but have not received a response (yet). I do not know the source and, therefore, copyright for any of the photos. Marksdaly (talk) 16:51, 9 February 2010 (UTC)