Talk:Sustainable Development Goal 9

To do list
These are improvements that could be made if anyone has time:
 * Provide more information (discussion, progress) for each indicator. Scour all the links on the HLPF website.
 * Add some more maps (from SDG Tracker website / Wikimedia Commons) and images (Wikimedia Commons)
 * Improve the flow of text in the background section because some of it reads like just a collection of facts but without good prose and flow.
 * Improve lead to make it a better summary of the article
 * Find any other good progress reports for SDG 9.
 * Provide more detail and references to the section on "linkages with other SDGs"
 * Find more progress information for some of the indicators which so far don't have progress information provided.
 * Add more wikilinks to other articles in Wikipedia and vice versa.
 * Find Wikipedia articles that explain some of the key concepts that are used in the SDG 9 article. We should not have to created new articles - often times they exist but just under different names. EMsmile (talk) EMsmile (talk) 07:43, 9 September 2020 (UTC)

Some work completed
I just expanded the background, added wikilinks, made the sentences simple to laypersons.Olabideen (talk)
 * I added Maps from commonsJames Moore200 (talk) —Preceding undated comment added 17:48, 23 September 2020 (UTC)
 * Rewrote the lead to provide context on the Goal and provide potential hooks for future content development. 2030 SDGs (talk) 02:48, 25 September 2020 (UTC)