Talk:Suze (The Cough Song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 20:05, 23 August 2023 (UTC)

This should be done quickly! --K. Peake 20:05, 23 August 2023 (UTC)

(Criteria marked are unassessed)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a. (prose, spelling, and grammar):
 * b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a. (reference section):
 * b. (citations to reliable sources):
 * c. (OR):
 * d. (copyvio and plagiarism):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a. (major aspects):
 * b. (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
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 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a. (major aspects):
 * b. (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
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Infobox and lead

 * How long ago dates were does not need to be noted in the infobox
 * Fixed. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 09:30, 25 August 2023 (UTC)


 * The exacty recording date and studio are not sourced anywhere in the body
 * Added the details with a source. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 12:30, 30 August 2023 (UTC)


 * WP:OVERLINK of Columbia under label(s)
 * "during the sessions for" → "during the sessions for his third studio album,"
 * "The track was written" → "The song was written"
 * "by Dylan and produced by" → "by Dylan, and produced by"
 * "started ninety seconds" → "started 90 seconds" per MOS:NUM
 * Move the standalone sentence to being in the same para as the rest since this is not enough on its own
 * "found the track enjoyable." → "found the song enjoyable."
 * Fixed the seven points above. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 09:30, 25 August 2023 (UTC)

Background and recording

 * Add a comma after E tuning
 * "ninety seconds into" → "90 seconds into" per MOS:NUM
 * "before saying that the song" → "until saying that the song" to avoid using before twice in one sentence
 * I amended the article per the three points above. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 12:35, 30 August 2023 (UTC)


 * "and the stanza's return." is this definitely about one stanza because if multiple, remove the apostrophe
 * Source has "Dylan accompanies the bridge and stanza’s return with harmonica." BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 12:35, 30 August 2023 (UTC)


 * Pipe Jimmie Tarlton to Darby and Tarlton
 * Add double speech marks around "Percy's Song"
 * I amended the article per the two points above. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 12:35, 30 August 2023 (UTC)

Release and reception

 * The tense of reviews needs to be consistent
 * Fixed. (Hopefully). BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 12:39, 30 August 2023 (UTC)

Personnel

 * Good

Final comments and verdict

 * until all of the issues are fixed! --K. Peake 20:39, 23 August 2023 (UTC)
 * Many thanks, . Hopefully I've fixed everything, but let me know if more work is required. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 12:41, 30 August 2023 (UTC)
 * ✅ now, thanks for the response within the expected timeframe of a week! --K. Peake 18:25, 30 August 2023 (UTC)