Talk:Sven (Frozen)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: QatarStarsLeague (talk · contribs) 17:16, 24 June 2018 (UTC)

"Sven is a fictional character who appears in the animated film Frozen (2013) produced by Walt Disney Animation Studios." I think a slightly editorial comment, a la "who most prominently appears in..." would be appropriate. "The sounds Sven makes were recorded by the voice actor Frank Welker." Given Sven doesn't speak, perhaps it would be good to detail some of the sounds he does in fact make. Having seen Frozen, I know that it basically runs the table of actual reindeer noises, but it might be good to specify. "Clio Chiang, another story artist, regarded Sven as a stubby animal..." I think quotation marks belong here if "stubby" is in fact the world she used. "Sven makes a cameo appearance in the film Moana (2016)." Given that film's Polynesian setting, readers (myself included) would be rapt to know how a reindeer was fit in. Great article, follows the established template for fictional characters quite well. 15:53, 11 July 2018 (UTC)

Hello and thank you for providing the review! I tried to fix each one of the comments from above, with just one mention: the word "stubby" is not exactly the one that was used; Chiang used the word "dumpy", but I decided to use a synonym in order to avoid repetition (since this word already appeared in that particular subsection) and to also avoid using quotation marks there. Flowerpiep (talk) 11:16, 17 July 2018 (UTC)Flowerpiep