Talk:Swan Song (McCammon novel)

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Some of the grammar in this article is horrible. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 67.149.59.129 (talk) 06:09, 5 July 2009 (UTC) This is an incomplete summary of the book's plot. It's maybe half of the entire story. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 170.170.59.138 (talk) 15:41, 8 July 2010 (UTC)

Umm.... they don't even finish the plot of the book on the artcle! A LOT happened after the K-Mart full of psychos where Leona died. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 74.178.116.170 (talk) 01:13, 11 July 2010 (UTC)

This article was written by someone who seems to be barely literate. It makes a mockery of one of my favourite books. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 86.179.67.55 (talk) 14:51, 25 July 2010 (UTC)

Plot summary is on my active to do list now. I'll do a trim of what's there first I think. THen fill in the rest of the story. It will probably take me a few weeks as I have to sort of re-read/skim to do it. Millahnna (mouse) talk  20:51, 5 August 2010 (UTC)

Copy editing
I copy edited this article, so all the spelling and grammar issues should now be fixed. However, the plot summary is still too long, and written in a rather disjointed way. It definitely still needs improvement. Spock of Vulcan (talk) 23:56, 3 May 2011 (UTC)

Possible resources for clean up and expansion
So at one point, just after I'd read the novel, I'd planned to trim up the plot summary and possibly expand the article at large, even though that's outside the scope of my usual efforts around these parts. I genuinely think that it is likely that I'll never get around to the expansion (though I may come back for the plot trim) and, frankly, it's now been too many years since I've read it for me to feel confident in looking up themes and the like. But if anyone else would like to undertake the task, I've kept my notes in my user sandbox here. Please feel free to use anything I've gathered; I only ask that you don't edit my sandbox page for it. Hope this helps someone. Cheers. Millahnna (talk) 00:37, 8 May 2017 (UTC)