Talk:Swaragini – Jodein Rishton Ke Sur

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Hi guyz m new here EramSwasan (talk) 17:41, 13 February 2016 (UTC)

Clarification needed
Can someone please explain what the original broadcast network(s) of this series is? As of this version of the article there is so much confusing content in the infobox, that I can't figure out where the series is airing. It looks like it aired first on Colors TV, is this correct? What is Rishtey's involvement with this series? Are these reruns or brand-new episodes? That's not clear from the article prose. If Rishtey is only airing reruns, that needs to be removed from the infobox. Also, Raj TV and TV One looks like reruns/dubs to me. Is this correct? If so, the info doesn't belong in the infobox. Whomever is interested in editing this article really needs to become familiar with MOS:TV, because the article in its state as of the above linked version, was a real mess. Thanks. Cyphoidbomb (talk) 01:11, 14 August 2016 (UTC)
 * From the way the article has been edited it seems to be a continuing series on Colors tv for example the additions to the no. of episodes carrys on sequentially from the start when it was only on colors tv so it would seem the other channels are showing reruns probably dubbed.. Atlantic306 (talk) 02:55, 14 August 2016 (UTC)


 * Can anyone expound upon whether or not what Atlantic306 says is an accurate assumption? References would help. Clarifying prose in the article would help too. Cyphoidbomb (talk) 08:49, 14 August 2016 (UTC)

Plot cut
In this edit I made a massive cut to the plot section. It had been flagged as too long since May 2016. Per MOS:TV this section shouldn't exceed 500 words or so, and it was taking up far too much space at 2800 words. Note also that this is not arbitrary, there are serious copyright concerns that arise when we attempt to summarize creative works. See FAQ/Copyright. Someone familiar with the show may either pare down the previous plot section to a more reasonable length, or write up a general shape of the series arc from scratch. Another option would be to create a List of episodes article and summarize each in 100-200 words. Cyphoidbomb (talk) 01:38, 14 August 2016 (UTC)

Cast reformatting
In these edits, I brought the cast section closer into alignment with WP:TVCAST. We care about Main and Recurring cast. These should be presented as level 3 headings, not as pseudo-headings (see WP:BADHEAD for examples). We do not create unique subsections for former cast. Per the guideline, "The cast listing should be organized according to the series original broadcast credits, with new cast members being added to the end of the list." So if some characters died or went to jail, they presumably should be in the middle of the recurring cast list, assuming that new characters were introduced later. I also removed the subjective labels "antagonist", "protagonist", etc. Per WP:ANTAGONIST, the community is not interested in these labels. What should happen instead, is that someone familiar with the series should endeavor to briefly explain who each character is, such that it would convey this information, like:
 * John Doe as Joe Khan - Joe, Harthik's brother, fell in love with Susan, but after he discovered Harthik was sleeping with her, Joe murdered Harthik and was eventually sent to prison.

This example doesn't require any interpretation or labels. We can tell that the guy was an asshole without slapping Antagonist at the end of the sentence. I strongly encourage anyone interested in this article to familiarize themselves with MOS:TV as this article needs to adhere to it, since it represents established community consensus for how TV articles should be formatted. Thanks. Cyphoidbomb (talk) 01:38, 14 August 2016 (UTC)

Mahasangam Episode
There's a section labeled Mahasangam Episode, but it's totally unclear what this means or what information is being conveyed. What is Mahansangam? Is it a holiday? Is it another word for "crossover"? What is the point of this section? Cyphoidbomb (talk) 09:03, 14 August 2016 (UTC)

Semi-protected edit request on 1 September 2016
there is no mention that the swaragini serial recieved high trps. thus it should be changed to the needful that it was one of the top shows of the time 116.68.79.218 (talk) 09:36, 1 September 2016 (UTC) More importantly, you have not cited reliable sources to back up your request, without which no information should be added to, or changed in, any article. - Arjayay (talk) 09:40, 1 September 2016 (UTC)
 * Red information icon with gradient background.svg Not done: as you have not requested a specific change in the form "Please replace XX with YY" or "Please add ZZ between PP and QQ".


 * Not only not done, but the IP has been adding a ton of personal analysis to articles like here. Cyphoidbomb (talk) 20:57, 1 September 2016 (UTC)

Semi-protected edit request on 25 December 2016
Plz complete PLOT SUMMARY 2405:204:520D:628F:0:0:2AB2:48A0 (talk) 19:35, 25 December 2016 (UTC)
 * Red question icon with gradient background.svg Not done: it's not clear what changes you want to be made. Please mention the specific changes in a "change X to Y" format. - Mlpearc  ( open channel ) 19:35, 25 December 2016 (UTC)

Semi-protected edit request on 4 February 2017
Plz complete summary 2405:204:5404:344E:0:0:1594:70A1 (talk) 19:59, 4 February 2017 (UTC)
 * Red information icon with gradient background.svg Not done: It's unclear what you mean by "complete summary". The plot summary is supposed to be a general overview of the series, not to provide an episode-by-episode recap. It should only be 500 words in length per WP:TVPLOT. The amount of detail that's already there should mostly be cut. Cyphoidbomb (talk) 20:22, 4 February 2017 (UTC)