Talk:Swaziland at the 2016 Summer Olympics/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 19:30, 24 October 2016 (UTC)

Going to review. MWright96 (talk) 19:30, 24 October 2016 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
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 * no dead links
 * Everything stated in the article is cited correctly

Lede

 * Wildcard should be one word as in the body

Background

 * Delink West Germany in the lede and background section
 * Do the same for Soviet Union
 * Change "100 m" and "200 m" to 100 metres and 200 metres for the ordinary reader - also same issue is in the lede
 * Delink Swaziland Olympic and Commonwealth Games Association at the second instance it is mentioned

Athletics

 * "he finished sixth within his heat of the men's 200 m" - 200 metres
 * Add how Ndzinisa qualified for Rio 2016.
 * "He finished ahead of Levi Cadogan of Barbados (21.02 seconds) and Tega Odele of Ghana (21.25 seconds)" - Ghana's Tega Odele
 * "with a time of 12.49." - 12.49 seconds
 * "Since she failed to finish in the two two places," - first