Talk:Sweet Love (Chris Brown song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 22:47, 2 August 2012 (UTC)

General

 * There are three dab links. ✅

Info box

 * No issues.

Lead

 * You say "Sweet Love" quite a lot. Change some of them to "It" or the "The song". ✅
 * "Musically, "Sweet Love" is a slow jam R&B ballad that displays elements of electronic music. Lyrically, it revolves around Brown asking his lover to get naked so they can have sexual intercourse." → "Sweet Love" is a slow jam R&B ballad which incorporates elements of electronic music. The lyrics of the song revolve around Brown asking his lover to take off her clothes so that they can have sex. ✅
 * "In the US," → In the United States, ✅
 * Write "chart" after Hot 100. ✅
 * → was co-directed ✅
 * "It features scenes of Brown and his love interest making love," → It displays intimate scenes of Brown and his lover partaking in sexual activity, ✅
 * "The video garnered positive reception from critics for its sexual theme." → Critics were complimentary of the video's sexual themes and presentation. ✅

Background and release

 * No issues.

Composition and lyrics

 * → "Sweet Love" is a slow jam R&B ballad that displays elements of electronic music; it lasts for a duration of three minutes and 19 seconds long. (You will have adjust footnotes accordingly. ✅
 * "so they can make sweet love." → Is this your own words?

Critical reception

 * No issues.

Music video

 * You don't need three subsections, you don't need subsections are all really. The paragraphs aren't long enough for it. ✅
 * → was co-directed ✅

Track listing

 * No issues.

Credits and personnel

 * No issues.

Chart performance

 * No issues.

Release history

 * No issues.

Summary
On hold for 7 days. Aaron  &bull; You Da  One 17:15, 6 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Passing :) Aaron  &bull; You  Da  One 23:04, 7 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Thanks! Oz   talk  23:18, 7 August 2012 (UTC)