Talk:Sweet Sixteen (apple)

Close paraphrasing
In places this article has text which is nearly verbatim from the cited source. Those need to be rewritten. Kablammo (talk) 16:27, 8 November 2018 (UTC)

You're right
Yes, I wrote the initial draft in too much of a hurry, too close to when I needed to crash. Did some re-writing, thanks.

dino (talk) 20:56, 8 November 2018 (UTC)