Talk:Sweets and Sour Marge/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer:  R uby2010   comment!  20:52, 26 July 2011 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:

Comments

 * Wikilink thirteenth season in lead
 * "The idea for the episode was pitched by Omine, who based on a lawsuit at the time, wherein smokers sued tobacco companies for selling harmful wares." I think there's a word missing
 * Unitalicize Motherloving Sweets and Sugar Company, and add quotation marks
 * Make sure sentences with quotes end with citations (like "According to Omine, the list "never ended," and when the writers ..." etc)
 * "At one point in the episode, the Springfield residents try to set the record or largest human pyramid, which fails when the pyramid collapses, causing the people to roll into a giant ball." I think a word is missing
 * "Despite the risk of redundancy, "Sweets" actually works..." Should be 'Sweets'
 * Decap refs 4, 6 and 11

On hold for seven days. Thanks,  R uby2010   comment!  21:13, 26 July 2011 (UTC)
 * Thanks again for the review! Queenieacoustic (talk) 10:28, 29 July 2011 (UTC)
 * Looks great. Pass for GA. Thanks,  R uby2010   comment!  16:29, 30 July 2011 (UTC)