Talk:Switzerland/GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer: Jhbuk (talk) 19:36, 24 January 2010 (UTC)

Generally good, but referencing needs to be improved
 * More references needed. "Switzerland and the European Union" only has references in the first paragraph; more are needed across the article where I've put cite needed tags (I've put them in general paragraphs needing cites, not just after specific facts)
 * Separate notes from references using - it's a lot easier to use than having them all grouped together
 * A few 1-2 sentence paragraphs that disrupt the flow ought to be combined with others
 * Couple of dead links
 * Add an external ref for number 22 about Lenin


 * Are all the external links really necessary?
 * Possibly too many images?
 * "Swiss armed forces" - "a high percentage of the people voted in favour of it" - can you quote the actual figure?

I'm putting the article on hold, as I think the references can be sorted out in a week.


 * I added some references and separated them from the notes but there are still two citations missing in the first section (Etymology). Apparently all dead links have alternate source. mge o  talk 16:25, 25 January 2010 (UTC)

Pass The article is at the GA standard - there are no substantial problems that would cause the article to fail the review. However, I think I can still see some areas that have still not been fixed from the first PR over 3 years ago, although the most significant have been. Jhbuk (talk) 18:22, 26 January 2010 (UTC)