Talk:Sydney Johnson/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sp33dyphil  Ready • to • Rumble  02:51, 7 May 2011 (UTC)


 * multiple letter of intent links.
 * fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 03:38, 7 May 2011 (UTC)
 * Please check for other multiple links - Penn, Baltimore Sun, The New York Times.
 * NYT and BS links only redundant in refs. Penn redundant through placeholder template.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 03:38, 7 May 2011 (UTC)
 * he was named Ivy League Player of the week, should that be placed in inverted commas since it's an honour - "Ivy League Player of the week"?
 * Never heard of that convention, but fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 03:40, 7 May 2011 (UTC)
 * No. That was a question. I thought that the honour was a proper noun, and that it should be capitalised and placed between inverted commas. I'm not insisting that you should do it. I was merely asking
 * I do not believe it is suppose to be in quotes. I never see it in press releases. I am going to undo.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 04:09, 7 May 2011 (UTC)
 * "rebuilding 'in which' it posted" --> 'during which'
 * fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 03:43, 7 May 2011 (UTC)
 * "2008-2009", add dash; check for other instances, like "2-4 start to win" and "13-14 with an 8-6 record"
 * fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 03:47, 7 May 2011 (UTC)
 * "While at Princeton, Johnson was a member of the Cap and Gown Club." - source?
 * Fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 04:04, 7 May 2011 (UTC)
 * "Johnson has been very involved" --> replace has with had?
 * Fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 03:49, 7 May 2011 (UTC)
 * format ref 75
 * fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 04:07, 7 May 2011 (UTC)
 * shouldn't Collegeinsider.com Coach of the Year be placed in inverted commas? And shouldn't the website be italicised?
 * No to the first and I don't believe so to the second.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 04:12, 7 May 2011 (UTC)
 * yields 3 dead links
 * Fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 04:28, 7 May 2011 (UTC)
 * Source for "Head coaching record" table?
 * Refs added.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 07:00, 7 May 2011 (UTC)

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