Talk:Sylvia Salazar Simpson

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 7 January 2019 and 27 April 2019. Further details are available on the course page. Peer reviewers: Valdovp.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 03:59, 18 January 2022 (UTC)

Shanny's Peer Review
Try expanding on each of the sections a little more. You have a great outline but it is missing a lot of meat. If possible try adding images of the artist work to the page. Also some other works of the artist, maybe different types of works to give the viewer a more wholistic view of the artist career and life. I also noticed that some of your facts have two citations to one simple sentence. Is that necessary? I honestly am not sure. You also do not expand on who the people are in her life. Who was her husband Thomas? What type of art did she create, abstract? concrete? Describe her exhibitions and what they meant to her if possible. One of the exhibitions is also missing a citation for reference.