Talk:Symbister House

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This article needs work. 1 - it is expressed in emotive language, not NPOV. The description of the relations between the owner/builders and the local community is described in terms more fitting for political meeting than Wikipedia. Terms like "exile", "forced labour" and "lorded" are highly pejorative. 2 - the English used deviates far from standard English; partly from the emotive language, but even in cases where the language is unemotive it is clumsy and requires attetion to discern the meanin. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 203.45.140.222 (talk • contribs)
 * I agree and I am surprised it passed DYK review in its current form.--ukexpat (talk) 03:58, 24 February 2013 (UTC)